17A: Elevator Pitch
https://youtu.be/E1fxbfbnkw8
(sorry, my phone broke, and I only had my laptop to film this on)
2) The only feedback I received was positive, other than that my peers asked that I make more gestures and stand up.
3) I didn't change the script or anything, I just stood up, walked around, and gestured more. I felt more confident doing it this time around compared to the first time.
Hi Fede,
ReplyDeleteAs your first elevator pitch had a good script, I think it is great that you stuck with the format and worked on your weaknesses. You definitely had great gestures and I think standing really added to the effectiveness of your pitch. I like how you walked around a bit, really adding some dynamic energy to your pitch. you most definitely appear confident and convincing.
Federico
ReplyDeleteI did not see your first pitch, so I went back and watched that one too. I think you did a great job on both of them. This one was more dynamic and convincing. I liked that you stood up this time and you did a great job with your hand gestures. It seems like you video is cut off at the 30 second mark though…
I watched both pitches and I can tell you seemed more confident this time. This one you really seemed to interact with the audience and have your pitch memorized very well. I did realize it was pretty short and I think the main reason for this is you may want to slow down a bit and let your audience really think about what your saying. I noticed each time we do these they become much easier. Overall great job.
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